|Reviews for Maggots|
| HighOnBrokenWings chapter 1 . 1/15/2013
Your descriptions in this piece are very gruesome. It gets to the point and is shocking like a horror should be :)
| sapphireshadow15 chapter 1 . 12/30/2012
I thoroughly enjoyed this piece. It was very gruesome and strange. The descriptions of the maggots were gross and unnerving. Put a clear image into my mind. Great work.
Here are some things I think you should revise:
She recognized that sneaker and had known who it had belonged to.
Not a bad sentence, by any means, but I felt it didn't really end the story well, as greatly as the story allowed. It almost seemed cliché, but I wouldn't worry too much. It didn't make me shame the story or anything. Perhaps something more dramatic, less commonly said in stories. Just an opinion.
Happy writing, friend