Reviews for Chloroform
iNdie OT chapter 1 . 3/20/2014
I would tell this as a bedtime story to my children. Tyla seemed freaked out, but I loved it. Such dark class, my dear. Well done, well done. I especially loved the ending... and the beginning... and the middle.
blank-unused chapter 1 . 2/26/2014
This is just great! :D totally made my day...
YourSecretAdmirer chapter 1 . 2/4/2014
Very morbid. I love it.
ninjawolf197 chapter 1 . 4/26/2013
Hey sapphire! May I take your hat sir? If you still don't know who this is it's Hannah. :-) oh, I have a question: how are you able to vomit if your guts are strewn everywhere?
Taim chapter 1 . 1/16/2013
Wow. Just wow.


I like your writing style and how you turn such dark content into what would be an innocent little girl's game. If not for the gore. And the violence.
tolerate chapter 1 . 12/31/2012
We should send this to the Fictionpress staff and tell them to add 'Horror' as a category for Poetry. I think I might be scared for the entire day. Good job, you just scared the hell out of me! It's a great poem, and I loved it.
Haiogh-Yai chapter 1 . 12/30/2012
I enjoyed this and I'm probably going to laugh the next time I hear chloroform.
Naver chapter 1 . 12/30/2012
This was highly disturbing for I was picturing that being me. It was funny to think about though and I do like the rest of the story with it. The crazy love this lady has is something else. A serial killer after men. Killing them with her love...literally. The violence and bloody scenes make it all the more real. *laughs* *shivers*