|Reviews for Half-Breed|
| Jehna Draeiven chapter 3 . 1/1/2014
I would loved getting licked by an inukonjou pup in the face! Kyaaaa! o/u/o
HIROSHI! MY MAN! IT'S SO NICE TO SEE YOU!
Arashi just makes a good father, doesn't he? OuO
Mae-sensei. This short sub-story is just. . . great. It's so great. It's so wonderful. It's just. . . so good. I can't even put it into words. It's just, it's so short but so. . . so meaningful. Much heart and everything. I would love to see this animated, or any of your works for the matter, really!
Oh, and let just tell you that you have a wonderful naming sense! Again, thank you so much, Mae-sensei, for taking your time and effort and love into creating this beautiful story! *bows down to the floor*
| Jehna Draeiven chapter 2 . 1/1/2014
Nnngh. I want to write scenes like this!
Powerful, beautiful scenes that are just. . . HNNGH! Beautiful, Mae-sensei! It's just. . . excellence in it's best!
You truly inspire me, Mae-sensei! Honest to goodness!
I'll work so hard so that I can write better and write wonderful scenes like this! OuO
Also, reading this chapter, made me want to have a puppy again! Or, an inukonjou puppy would be okay too! Better, in fact!
| Jehna Draeiven chapter 1 . 1/1/2014
As per your instruction, Mae-sensei (yup, I'm hereby dubbing you sensei because you're awesome), I've went ahead and gave this a read first before continuing with Chapter 18 of EW! And I must say, this is just. . . wonderful. Beautiful. Short, but straight to the point. It's sending tinglys down my spine.
Arashi's a Japanese band, isn't it? Was that where you got his name? OuO
To be honest, I'd love to be an inukonjou. Even a half-blood would be wonderful! I'd want to be a wind type, so I can (hopefully) get wings! And in that sense, I'd just love to live in this world you've wonderfully created, Mae-sensei! I definitely would! ouo
Nnngh. Humans can really be revolting beings sometimes. I really wish I was an inukonjou instead. ;w;
| xxxyx chapter 3 . 8/22/2013
Ah, I like the way you present the society norma of this world you created. "...he is obligated to obey and uphold the laws of any human or inukonjou village he's serving, even the unjust ones such as this." Yes, this part.
And the pups really make adorable additions to the story. But, yeah, they're what it's all about, right?
Aw... now I wish I can make a good back story for mine! Paru
| xxxyx chapter 2 . 8/22/2013
The use of solemn, strong images, is really a powerful tool you have in your hands. Congrats. And you did it without ruining the story's flowing prose. So far, this really fits the premise of a short story.
I like the way you present Arashi's POV and his thoughts.
| xxxyx chapter 1 . 8/22/2013
Heya, dropping by. Ah, a story in present tense. Interesting.
Yes, I like the way your writing conveys the atmosphere of the story. Tense and full of emotion. It's like I can really imagine what it feels like to be in the tavern, in Arashi's mind and feelings. I'll delve into this some more, I guess.
| Revamp chapter 3 . 7/2/2013
Picturing Arashi with those sleeping pups is adorable. Interesting that Mamoru is one of the pups names. I'm pretty sure it's /that/ Mamoru. When I read the other pups' names I went, 'yes, it's got to be them'.
"I did the pig tails myself." Lol Hiroshi, you are so cute and I chuckled. Great information that defined the water types as well.
I loved this story. Arashi is an adorable father and this short story was very sweet.
| Revamp chapter 2 . 7/2/2013
I like the information provided about the pups and their features. It gives me a good visual of what they are like when they are born. I also had a feeling that the mother would be dead. I actually thought that was the original reason why the pup was barking. Arashi with the pups is both cute and humorous.
| Revamp chapter 1 . 7/2/2013
Arashi is interesting. I like his sense of equality and justice for the half bloods. I see that the mention of Miroku's name and the situation with the half-bloods among the humans and pure bloods is similar to Inuyasha and I see your inspiration there. Arashi's sense of compassion and justice must be what's compelling him to pursue the woman.
| ShinigamiForHire chapter 2 . 1/2/2013
Please, continue :) This is an amazing story 3
| Lolitroy chapter 1 . 12/31/2012
Well, it has peaked my interest. Yay :D just tell me whenever you post the main arc and I'll read it :D