|Reviews for tick tick|
| electrical moon chapter 1 . 1/2/2013
This is a fantastic story. It's so concise, yet vivid and emotional, full of impact (literally and figuratively). I'm a little confused about the divisions (the titles and why it's divided) but I probably just need to read it again.
| Nitzer chapter 1 . 12/31/2012
There's a certain intensity to how choppy and unfocused the writing style it but without this story wouldn't work nearly as well as it does.
| Pzychotic chapter 1 . 12/30/2012
I know I haven't been reading your other stuff lately but I will soon.
This isn't much different from your poetry to be honest, even if it is prose. I think this is awesome because it's still really vague and dreamlike, but there is more substance to it. Plus, it helps me understand it a bit more :) Please write more in this style! I really love it.