Reviews for What Happens in Society
Ygg chapter 1 . 1/3/2013
If caring leads to vanity, then it was not a genuine caring but merely an egocentric disguise. This is indeed a self-destructive spiral, but also an opportunity to learn from it, to evolve and REALLY learn to care. The people who genuinely care could not have been so without a little dash of self-destructive behaviour, but at least they know how to integrate this dark behaviour into a greater framework of compassion and tolerance. And that capacity to change and evolve will one day prove not be the death of society, but its cure.
ThisIsRealLife101 chapter 1 . 12/30/2012
I liked this, too. You could've done this into chapters with the other poem. I loved this.
True Talker chapter 1 . 12/30/2012
It is Important for people to care about each other. The world NEEDS to be more connected. There is TOO much disconnect in society that is why people are dying needlessly. EVERYTHING has energy and so do we as humans if we cut off our energy flow then we die from the inside out just like our body's cells do. Just think about that.