Reviews for The Night
HyperJuggernaut chapter 1 . 1/30/2013
Hmmm, I would Add more imagery as I never experienced the feelings I feel like you were trying to create. The poem just seemed a little Cliche as it doesn't stand out from other poetry of the same type. It also was over very fast, and the whole poem followed the Same template. Perhaps make it longer and generally expand on the ideas. Make me afraid of the night and horrified that you find it beautiful.
Bunny's Daughter chapter 1 . 1/30/2013
I don't see why it should be changed.
skersey chapter 1 . 12/31/2012
"Night is filled with diamond stars/When we battle our scars" is my favorite line, because we can go through the day and fight off all sorts of negativity, and the night is like a reward. It was really well put. Well written piece, thanks for sharing!
ThisIsRealLife101 chapter 1 . 12/30/2012
I actually really liked it. And, on a demented, scary, note, I actually really liked how you ended it, with the last line.