Reviews for Falling
SlackerNeopyhte chapter 1 . 12/31/2012
Kinda simplistic. I like the idea that you were going for - it kinda reminds me of that song by Metallica, "No Leaf Clover", in that the thing you're looking at for hope turns out, well, to be a speeding train coming your way. I really think this poem could have been better with some more interesting imagery, a little more imagination, but maybe that can happen in the second draft, perhaps.
Daemone Angelus chapter 1 . 12/31/2012
In the pit of despair, some do accept their fate. But wouldn't be too easy to stop fighting? To just give up? There is no harm is fighting if you have nothing left. You can always die a different day if things don't get better.