|Reviews for Left Us 4 Dead|
| Kerithen chapter 2 . 8/11/2013
Well, this is actually really well written and executed. I'm on chapter 2, and noticed a few.. mishaps. For one, when Bree gets infected, shouldn't everyone, at least Zero, be like "Oh god, no!" or something? Also, shortly after that, they're making fun of Zero, after Bree died. Isn't that kinda cruel? Unless you're painting them as cruel or jerks, that's really weird. Oh, and for Dave's accent, good job!
All and all, quite a good read, punctuation and grammar is pretty good too. This story deserves more attention.
| SilverSplashSheikah chapter 3 . 5/29/2013
I love how the people in this story are inspired by real people ;)
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/29/2013
Honestly, I really, really like it. I also write a little, and I try to write with people as much as I can because its awesome :P so I was kinda wondering if you wanted to write with me? I never wrote a zombie story, but I'd love to try!
by the way I'm Anna, I'm 16 and uhm, yeah.
my email is so please email me if you want to write :D
| st chapter 1 . 1/29/2013
This is fictionpress. this website is for original works. if u want a good place to publish this fic of yours, go to , the sister website of this story.
| hero in a cup chapter 1 . 1/28/2013
Why is this here when you have the same story on ?
| Jalissa Chase chapter 2 . 1/22/2013
They accepted that pretty quickly. And Bree changed instantly. It's so quick...
| freddyburn chapter 1 . 1/14/2013
nice first chapter
| madmoose52 chapter 1 . 1/13/2013
This is fictionpress, a website for original works. Fanfics belong on .
| Mr. Sub Zero chapter 11 . 1/13/2013
Yes! Bigger team! Awesome story!
| Mr. Sub Zero chapter 10 . 1/13/2013
| Mr. Sub Zero chapter 9 . 1/13/2013
Yay! Eric's alive! Thank you.
Awesome familiy will be made.
| Mr. Sub Zero chapter 8 . 1/7/2013
"After my shower though." Mitch said
with a toothy grin. He once again
walked up the stairs. The others were
silent while the waited. They all had on
an amused look on their faces.
"AHHH! SHIT! THE FUCKING SPIDER IS
STILL IN HERE!"
Best part XD, and you know the tank they killed was my relative ;_;
And also update, wheeeee! because I am a zombie myself and if you don't update I'll eat you :D
| Mr. Sub Zero chapter 7 . 1/7/2013
Mitch should kill her too, idiot Willow. But it's a fic :D so cheers!
| Mr. Sub Zero chapter 6 . 1/7/2013
Stupid ignoramus girl Willow, she might got Dave killed. But oh well.
| Mr. Sub Zero chapter 5 . 1/7/2013
Sad part of the story ;_; But still good. Thankya