Reviews for Urge
ThinkPi chapter 1 . 2/8/2013
The rhythm in this one strikes me as wonderfully creative. A bit freeverse I'd say but in a great way. I like how you organized it and I feel that you wrote very freely yet with control. I love the first two lines the most, you set the mood well with them and from there on your words had impact and solidity. The closing line was slightly weak if I had to be constructive, I don't mind starting a sentence with and, but starting the last line of just a few words awkwardly ends the poem in my opinion, the full resolution wasn't reached. I get the feeling that the resonating light is vague, unexplained, and adds more than it ties up. Maybe that's why I get the feeling the speaker of the poem is unfinished. Fantastic job nonetheless.
KaylaHeart chapter 1 . 1/1/2013
Wow, just wow. Gorgeous!
Naver chapter 1 . 1/1/2013
I love the rhyming, the message is, it seems, of wanting. Very strong and wonderfully conveyed. I really like this one.
402mph chapter 1 . 1/1/2013
It's deep. Brofist worthy _ very calm... like being caressed by the wings of an angel.