Reviews for Rapture Untamed
zagato chapter 20 . 2/29/2020
Wonderful
zagato chapter 16 . 2/29/2020
Nice twist
zagato chapter 14 . 2/29/2020
What a twist
Imwaiting4myAliceandEdward chapter 20 . 5/24/2019
I love this wolf mate story. Thank you so much for sharing.
Guest chapter 12 . 11/10/2018
I don't know why but this story is becoming more predictable by the moment.
I wanted to read something different than all the other werewolf stories
I guess I was expecting more relationship development between the main pair
Also I was disappointed to see that the girl is potrayed to be so weak
Bur I like the fact that most of the story till now has taken place in different places, showing versatility and also no random ass rogue has kidnapped her
Also the fact that there has not been a single cliched scene
I also love the way that the sex scened are written, it differentiated your story, it proves that this is not going to be a total erotica, but an actual story with plot and storyline other than sex.
Good job
TheTruthHurts chapter 20 . 7/23/2018
Girl...
Your dialogue
Is just
So bad
And the sex scenes were extremely terrible it’s like a 12yr old was told to describe love making. Whew chile
Thetruthhurts chapter 3 . 7/23/2018
Can Kane talk like he’s an actual human being from his time and not a time traveler from the 18th century. He’s one “thou shalt” away from coming off extremely cringy. Yikes
Dulce129 chapter 12 . 10/17/2016
She didn't really "mean it" when she said I love you. But she hopes one day soon. Lol
I want to throat punch her
Dulce129 chapter 11 . 10/17/2016
I'm shocked at what an idiot she is this chapter. I mean - she flat out broke her promise to him. And he even told her that being close to him and her avoiding Trey would HELP keep him out of trouble.
So clubbing, bra-less with Trey seems like a good idea?!
firzasavira chapter 2 . 6/22/2016
I agree he is such a badass 3
slcjnk2008 chapter 19 . 3/7/2016
Hi Destiny, Of course Trey needs his own story and you bet I would read it as soon as you write it. Trey deserves to be happy too! - Shelley
slcjnk2008 chapter 8 . 3/7/2016
Hi Destiny, I wanted to let you know that this is the second time I have read this story and it is just as great as the first time I read it. I still find myself being pulled into this amazing world you have created and once again enjoying Kyra and Kane's unfolding story. - Shelley
Furballmews chapter 21 . 5/14/2015
I hope my favoriting this encourages others to read this as well, ive read allot of the higher ranked stories and i have to say yours blows allot of them out of the water. I appreciate the time you must have spent editing and spell checking, which sadly others do not think as important. I throughly enjoyed your story and hope you continue to write.
Kairi Moon Goddess chapter 1 . 1/24/2014
Interesting start!
Aozora27 chapter 15 . 1/1/2014
I would like to say that I loved the story; the way the plot was planned out and the romance were great. The only problem I have is character development, particularly that of Kyra. And it's not that the development was bad; it's just that I dislike the way she was portrayed. It seems like her perception of strength is physical prowess/muscles. She was physically weak, yet insisted on being strong and ended up only causing trouble for Kane. And she wasn't even SORRY! She broke her promise to not hang out with Trey; she didn't believe Kane when he warned her against other guys wanting her. She's just so... shallow. Throughout the stories, I kept wishing that Kane would just abandon her for once instead of always being the one seeking Kyra's attention. People take for granted what they have, just like Kyra took for granted Kane's love and broke her promises to him. Overall, I just disliked her personality, but at least she wasn't a automatic robot with no emotions. To sum it up, the story was great, though Kyra could probably treat Kane better. This is just my feelings and opinions, so don't be offended. I think the storyline and the romance were great; it's just Kyra's personality that goes against my own beliefs and principles.
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