cool story

Wonderful

Nice twist

What a twist

I love this wolf mate story. Thank you so much for sharing.

I don't know why but this story is becoming more predictable by the moment.
I wanted to read something different than all the other werewolf stories
I guess I was expecting more relationship development between the main pair
Also I was disappointed to see that the girl is potrayed to be so weak
Bur I like the fact that most of the story till now has taken place in different places, showing versatility and also no random ass rogue has kidnapped her
Also the fact that there has not been a single cliched scene
I also love the way that the sex scened are written, it differentiated your story, it proves that this is not going to be a total erotica, but an actual story with plot and storyline other than sex.
Good job

Girl...
Your dialogue
Is just
So bad
And the sex scenes were extremely terrible it’s like a 12yr old was told to describe love making. Whew chile

Can Kane talk like he’s an actual human being from his time and not a time traveler from the 18th century. He’s one “thou shalt” away from coming off extremely cringy. Yikes

She didn't really "mean it" when she said I love you. But she hopes one day soon. Lol
I want to throat punch her

I'm shocked at what an idiot she is this chapter. I mean - she flat out broke her promise to him. And he even told her that being close to him and her avoiding Trey would HELP keep him out of trouble.
So clubbing, bra-less with Trey seems like a good idea?!

I agree he is such a badass 3

Hi Destiny, Of course Trey needs his own story and you bet I would read it as soon as you write it. Trey deserves to be happy too! - Shelley

Hi Destiny, I wanted to let you know that this is the second time I have read this story and it is just as great as the first time I read it. I still find myself being pulled into this amazing world you have created and once again enjoying Kyra and Kane's unfolding story. - Shelley

I hope my favoriting this encourages others to read this as well, ive read allot of the higher ranked stories and i have to say yours blows allot of them out of the water. I appreciate the time you must have spent editing and spell checking, which sadly others do not think as important. I throughly enjoyed your story and hope you continue to write.

Interesting start!