Reviews for Rapture Untamed
bookworm6193 chapter 8 . 10/1/2013
Trey needs to get over it. He's had two years to make a move and when someone else is interested he starts to get pissy. Great chapter!
bookworm6193 chapter 7 . 10/1/2013
I'm so ready for them to be mated! Great chapter!
Alaeryel chapter 20 . 10/1/2013
I can't believe this story is over and I LOVED IT! Is there a possibility to a second one to it? May be from Kane's pack side? I think it would be great but if not it is ok!

I love the idea of both the new stories you have in mind. Touch of Temptation is the one you are working on with your sister right? The sneak peak I read was great and this part you posted here sounds EXCELLENT!

I also love the sound of the second one and it definitely is a different genre for you but still sounds MARVELOUS and can't wait for them!
Alaeryel chapter 19 . 10/1/2013
I read this chapter with sh** eating grin all the way thru it and now I think it is time for a cold shower Des-MAGNIFICENT ENDING and wish I had a werewolf or vamp all my own-guess only in my dreams-OH WELL SUCH IS LIFE-LOL! YOU BETTER THINK ABOUT PUBLISHING THESE STORIES GIRL- I would hate to have to hunt you down and instill some harsh words to motivate you-LOL-I would never but I do think they are publish worthy girl-OUT OF THIS WORLD ASTOUNDING!
Alaeryel chapter 18 . 10/1/2013
I knew Kane wouldn't die but OMG I never even imagined Trey would KILL Leo although he deserved to be killed! I can't wait to see Calvin get his come uppance and I hope he dies a SLOW, AGONIZING DEATH!
Alaeryel chapter 17 . 10/1/2013
I WILL NEVER GIVE UP ON YOU but I may get AGGRAVATED at what you wrote and even then I know it is for the good of the story and I know to EXPECT A TWIST so you are free and clear of my DERANGED ANGER! LOL! You were definitely right-this chapter was intense and I found myself screaming and holding my breath-NOT AN EASY THING TO DO! GIRL YOU ARE SLAYING ME HERE!
Alaeryel chapter 16 . 10/1/2013
DAMN IT TO HELL GIRL-you are SERIOUSLY TRYING TO GIVE ME A HEART ATTACK AREN'T YOU?! I am not so sure I would trust Lucinda and I will bite myself if it turns out she can trust her but my gut says OH HELL NO she isn't to be trusted! YOU ARE TRYING TO KILL ME-I KNOW IT-LOL!
bookworm6193 chapter 6 . 10/1/2013
Playing with babies gets him an A in my book lol. Great chapter!
bookworm6193 chapter 5 . 10/1/2013
Aw! Kane wears actually sort of sweet at the end of the chapter. Great chapter!
bookworm6193 chapter 4 . 10/1/2013
That last bit didn't sound good at all! Great chapter!
bookworm6193 chapter 3 . 10/1/2013
I hope Trey doesn't do anything irrational! Great chapter!
bookworm6193 chapter 2 . 10/1/2013
Kane sounds hot! Great chapter!
bookworm6193 chapter 1 . 10/1/2013
Love it the beginning! I can't wait to read more!
Alaeryel chapter 15 . 9/25/2013
I think they are PERFECT for one another and I AM REALLY REALLY PISSED at Leo right now AND PLEASE tell me that Trey wasn't involved in this deception! I don't think he was but I never know what runs thru your mind sometimes girl!

I want to tell you what I hopes happens to Calvin-a little saying my dad always said BUT I can't do that as it is very very very bad and I don't want to offend or be kicked off this site-LOL!

littlelil1991 chapter 19 . 9/22/2013
Finally I'm able to post a review. I would read a chapter in between doing school work and chores and when I finished another chapter was posted. First I have to say that I'm glad Trey is now the Alpha although at first I couldn't believe that Leo would try to betray Kyra like that. Second, I really enjoyed the fight scenes and was sad when Kane fell out the window and how his pack had also been hurt. Lastly, I'm glad everything in the story ended on a good note. I cannot wait to read the epilogue and also wouldn't mind reading Trey's story!
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