Reviews for Rapture Untamed
wprairtiesr chapter 16 . 9/16/2013
No that bitch won't help her! don't follow her kyra!
Alaeryel chapter 14 . 9/9/2013
Ok Des-I told your sister I was going to read her's first then yours but oops I read your's first! What can I say? It was another AMAZING and BRILLIANT chapter! I am just flabbergasted at Leo and I have a feeling everything is going to go to hell in a hand basket soon! I also read the sneak peak of the two of yours new story-FANTASTIC and I CANNOT WAIT FOR IT! Your writing just ASTOUNDS ME! I love Kyra and Kane together-they are PERFECT! Definitely going to be watching for more of this and the other updates whenever you get to them!
wprairtiesr chapter 14 . 9/5/2013
LEO YOU ASSHOLE.
AnonymousReads chapter 14 . 9/4/2013
Yay new chapter. I love the story. Update soon. Please. :)
Guest chapter 2 . 7/6/2013
it's a really interesting start to a story! i think that kane is a badass too - although you might want to check out what a guy looks like at 6'6" and 200 lb because that's pretty scrawny-looking, especially if it's all muscle.
Mintfrost291 chapter 13 . 6/29/2013
Great story! Can't wait for an update!
Ladyodd chapter 13 . 6/27/2013
Ah seems like she excepting her mate, which is good. Oh no what will happen to them, with the man hunting them
littlelil1991 chapter 13 . 6/13/2013
I like this story so much. Poor Kyra and Kane having to deal with so much pain and trouble now. I'm guessing the next chapter will be the ceremony and I can't wait to read about. Also, I can't wait to see what Kane ends up doing about Calvin.
Alaeryel chapter 13 . 5/13/2013
DAMN DAMN DAMN Des-I ADORE Kane and Kyra together and it isn't fair they have so much TROUBLE with Leo's pack but it is the way of things! BLOODY HELL I cannot WAIT UNTIL YOU KILL Calvin and he gets his comeuppance PERMANENTLY! I love Missy, she is so sweet and I cannot wait for the celebration girl! I wonder what Leo will say if and when he finds out what the letter said-you are right-THINGS ARE GOING TO GO TO HELL IN A HANDBASKET FAST! I am GIDDY with ANTICIPATION!
AlanisBRAVO chapter 12 . 4/20/2013
I love Kane ! & I love this story ! Update soon :)
smurf-love chapter 12 . 4/15/2013
i love the way the story is going but i feel like this chapter differed to the others in the content. they way things happened in the club was confusing and fast and the sex i felt was the majority of the chapter. don't get me wrong i love that too but i felt like you could have played more on the club seeing as how that is the man kane is hunting and is also the man who wants kyra.
monkeyface1 chapter 12 . 4/15/2013
I dont cuss at authors i like even if they didnt update in A LONG A** TIME! the chapter was great but i think my heart skipped a beat when calvin went up to kyra cause i thought he was going to take her, i was like NOOOOO!
but he didnt so ha! i love the heated scene between my my favourite couple, such possessivness... ;) thanks for updating, hope to see another soon.
Alaeryel chapter 12 . 4/14/2013
OMG BLOODY HELL Des-Kyra just seems to make things worse and worse where Kane is concerned and NOW she has Calvin after her again and I have a feeling ALL HELL IS GONNA BREAK LOOSE! Also I Trey's dad is going to come unglued and repercussions are bound to occur and not necessarily good ones! I was so ECSTATIC when I saw an update and couldn't wait to read it! How is your puppy doing? Jasper had his first day of puppy training at Pet Smart and we have another new dog that we are fostering until a home can be found and his name is Boomer. I am always watching for your updates and still dying for Vae and Lori's story-ANOTHER EXCEPTIONAL CHAPTER girl!
wprairtiesr chapter 11 . 3/23/2013
Kyra you idiot. One- Kane is gonna be PISSED. Two- Calvin is gonna find her at the club. Three- asdfghjkl. Please Update!
Smurf-love chapter 11 . 3/11/2013
i love it. and it would make since that she didn't think of what Kane would do she's never been around mated pairs and all that jazz, though i did think that leo thought of her as a daughter more of a potential mate. can't wait for the next chapter. i would totally email you to get it but i have a thing about reading them when they come out. i like the suspense lol. keep up the good work!
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