i love it. and it would make since that she didn't think of what Kane would do she's never been around mated pairs and all that jazz, though i did think that leo thought of her as a daughter more of a potential mate. can't wait for the next chapter. i would totally email you to get it but i have a thing about reading them when they come out. i like the suspense lol. keep up the good work!

I think kyra is a little dumdum but in a way she needs alittle outing but hell i'd be lying if i said i wasnt scared for her. eee i dont know why but this chapter makes me all giddy! i cant wait for the next chapter! this chapter is awesome and i cant believe leo wanted her! i love kane i swear if him and kyra werent together i'd ravish him...thank you so much for updating!:D I LOVE YOU!

Cliff hanger, we know that Calvin is going out to town for blood and Kyra is dressed to the nines going out with the one person Kane asked her not too.
Looking forward to finding out what happens next!

Thanks for the update!
:)

Ha, I love that the alpha's name is Leo. So far, this is a great story. I have only read the prologue, but it's quite interesting. It reminds me of Nightshade by Andrea Cremer. Your story is written quite well, despite a few punctuation errors.

the case of, "It will be all right now. You're safe. Trey said," it should always be a comma after "You're safe" rather than a period.

Also, when it comes to talking about how a character feels, you need to make strong choices.

Ex. "She wanted to see the source of the noise, but was almost fearful." Take out almost. It sounds like you don't know what to say or that you are unconfident in your choices. You could use a word that is not as strong as "fearful" like "wary" or hesitant".

To be honest with you, I am not sure as to why you have labelled this "prologue" for it seems more like the first chapter. But I guess I'm just being picky, so don't think too much about it.

I look forward to reading the next chapters and thank you for sharing it with everyone.

Des-Didn't Kane ask her to stay away from Trey? Didn't she agree? WHAT IS THAT GIRL THINKING? You are right Kane is going to be sooooooooooooooo PISSED AT HER! Plus now since Calvin is going into town and wants blood-is it going to be someone from their group or could he maybe going after the one guy's wife and baby? DAMN DAMN DAMN-MY STOMACH IS CHURNING AND I AM BOUNCING OFF THE WALLS! I am ANXIOUSLY AWAITING the next chapter now and almost 'wetting' myself for it!

Noo kyra don't do it D: it's a disaster waiting to happen!

yeah she's and idiot... and he is going to be so mad... but great chapter! can't wait for the next one! xoxo

Ahhhhh kyra is crazyyy! Doing a great job man keep it up!

Kane is going to be unbelievably pissed. Especially, since she just promised to try and stay away from Trey. Kyra is going to be in a lot of trouble...either when she gets home or Kane finds her. Let's face it, when Kane wakes up and finds her gone, his wolf is going to panic and so is he.

I have to wonder since Calvin was going into town too if he'll smell Kane's scent on Kyra and take her. We can only hope that he wouldn't plan on doing to her what he did to Kane's mother. Though perhaps her skills will keep her alive.

I definitely look forward to seeing what happens next.

i love it though im really interested on who Kane wants revenge on i dont know if its Calvin or not.

HOT HOT HOT GIRL! LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVED IT-IMMENSELY! They are a GREAT MATCH for one another! I WILL DEFINITELY BE WATCHING FOR MORE! MAGNIFICENT JOB!

DAMN IT TA HELL GIRL-what is wrong with Kyra? Actually I know what is wrong and it is completely understandable to have her fears-she hadn't had the easiest life. I LOVE, ADORE and ADMIRE Kane-I think once she REALIZES and ADMITS it to herself-she will find a GREAT HAPPINESS with him.

My heart BREAKS for Kane and I REALLY REALLY WANT his revenge to be a slow and extremely painful death. I hope that Leo is understanding enough especially as he seems to care deeply for Kyra to allow Kane there without much hassles! I WILL DEFINITELY BE WATCHING FOR MORE and now on to the next chapter!

Another awesome and fun story!
Cant wait to see what happens.

:)

Your stories are like a drug to me...I can't get enough!

great chapter! can't wait for the next chapter! xoxo