|Reviews for Confession|
| Benedict A.86 chapter 1 . 1/3/2013
Your words really speak to me, and strangely enough I find myself relating to it. We all want to make such a confession, just let all the pent up emotions escape. But no one really listens until you do something stupid, and they'll be like 'why didn't you just come to me'.
Monologues are hard, people sometimes loose the flow, and the whole thing just sounds like random ranting, so I can really appreciate what you put up there. The progression was steady enough, the transitioning was also well done.
I however think you should consider the rating. The theme can tend to be suggestive; some of the words are really deep. Perhaps T would have been more appropriate.
I look forward to reading more from you.