Reviews for Super Rescue |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Awwwww :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well. That was ridiculous and adorable. :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() so weet |
![]() ![]() That last line was perfect! Good job on another great story. Love that is was told through a toys perspective lol x |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi! Your piece has been added to the Hate/Love category over on A Drop Of Romeo :) Here's your review: Lenah. C's response to a SKoW prompt is a fun read. Though the plot might initially seem a little bit like Toy Story's, you'll soon find that Lenah. C manages to spin a new tale of her own. I think this was mostly thanks to the strong narrative voice. Red, a rag doll, is Kerrie's favorite doll. They play together and live together, until Andrew moves in with his action figure, Superman. Both Kerrie and Andrew begin a hate/love relationship and so do their dolls. This allowed a double romance story to take place. Also, Kerrie and Andrew's relationship is typically the one read in stories; therefore, it was nice to see it shift into the background and to have the focus on something more original. The relationship between both doll and owners was nice, and it was cute to see how the dolls would reflect each character's personality. For example, Andrew starts hanging out with Laura, who owns a Barbie. This says a lot about the Barbie's owner. All in all, this was a good read. The piece was devoid of any spelling or grammar mistakes, and it was nicely paced. The ending was cute and the last line was beyond suitable. |
![]() ![]() ![]() How cute! It's so adorable! With no spelling or grammar errors! Me happy! Nawww! Cuuute! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my God, this is so adorable! *sniff sniff* I was planning to reread Of Dukes and Peasants again before I stumbled upon this. :) Great job on writing this! It felt very cohesive and was not boring at any point at all. You kept me wanting more. Thank you for writing this! This made my day. |
![]() ![]() Such an adorable story! Keep writing:) |
![]() ![]() This was such a sweet story, and funny too. Toy stories aren't my favorites, but this was good. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG this was adorable! It was refreshing and unique and makes me want to watch Toy Story again to be honest haha. I loved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was a little bit confused at first but then I figured out that they were toys. I was really moved by this story to tell the truth. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story was undeniably sweet! Was it a one shot? If it is you should make a one shot about Kerrie and Andrew! What type of doll was Red? :) |