Reviews for Perfection
Mylilblackpen chapter 1 . 1/19/2013
My opinion of perfection is see someone for who they truly are (even their flaws) and accepting them for who they are, because you couldn't imagine life without them - that's what makes a person perfect to someone. I think this is a beautiful piece with some really thought provoking ideas presented really nicely, love the flow. Beautiful piece!
AppleCrumble chapter 1 . 1/4/2013
Really good job, liked it!
True Talker chapter 1 . 1/3/2013
I read this and it makes me think. I will say this when someone inspires you where no one else can and when someone's mind is beyond intelligence. When your heart is taken by someone's soul you then see perfection in the person aka the someone aka him aka the one.
ygg chapter 1 . 1/3/2013
For me, perfection seems too unnatural to be real. Still, I find this a decent poem as it is introspective at the end. Well done!