|Reviews for This is no illusion|
| Daemone Angelus chapter 1 . 1/3/2013
Hahaha. I like it. Reminds me of my ex. Always on her damned phone . As if what is in front of her wasn't of the slightest importance.
I however do not care for the length, and the message is not the easiest to understand. You're very abstract about your message. A little revision would not hurt the work. I think it loses the message for the slower three-fourths of the populace. :P