|Reviews for passage|
| Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 1/4/2013
What a beautiful and mysterious haiku indeed! It takes me into a dream world. Just magical. And your summary also helps sets the tone of this haiku. Write on!
| Punslinger chapter 1 . 1/3/2013
A keen depiction of the uncertain balance we all must
maintain through much of life. Nicely done.