Reviews for Lust Driven By Longing
rachie1277 chapter 10 . 2/17/2013
I feel this chapter was a bit rushed but still really good! I enjoyed it much! Update soon :)
rachie1277 chapter 8 . 2/4/2013
Noooooo!
I don't like how Aiden moved on so fast :/
Or is he just trying to make him jealous?! O:
Either way, it was quite quick of a decision for Aiden to turn around and kiss another guy for w/e reason.
Update soon!
holywillows chapter 7 . 1/26/2013
noooooo aiden come back :o
Anon chapter 2 . 1/6/2013
Nice chapter, but Aiden is right: "Quelle est votre ville natale comme ?" doesn't actually mean anything. It's "A quoi ressemble votre ville natale ?" or "Décrivez votre ville natale." Otherwise, I like the story so far.
amywils chapter 1 . 1/4/2013
I have edited this to be all in first person, but it hasn't seemed to have uploaded :/ sorry!
Guest chapter 1 . 1/3/2013
You keep switching, not enough to get confused but still