Reviews for Imaginary
Ordet Alene chapter 1 . 1/3/2013
Quite abstract indeed. I like it. The words are yours, but they can recall different images to the mind's eye of each reader. Many poets force a specific image with detailed description. I love that this poem creates a personal connection with anyone who reads it (provided they have an imagination, of course). Beautifully dark... or darkly beautiful.
Anonymous chapter 1 . 1/3/2013
This is very interesting. It captured my imagination for sure. You are very abstract with this piece and that i loved very much. It's a darker poem and usually I don't like dark but this was definitely worthy of commenting on. I was especially transfixed with the lines "Folded our dreams into flowers/and tied our hearts to telephone wires" It creates this sense of danger almost. Like you introduce flowers as dreams like maybe they could become real. Then follow it with telephone wires it's very juxtaposing if you think about it. Great write Pocket. I'm impressed.