Reviews for Who I am
fantasybookworm2012 chapter 1 . 1/18/2013
I liked your poem. And if I can I'm going to offer a little advice about the situation. Try being yourself and doing what YOU want to do and not what others tell you is what you should do {coming from the kid in band who wants to quit but won't because her parent say it's good for her, yeah I'm a bit hypocritical right now.}
Just try and be yourself.
Elijah Wolff chapter 1 . 1/6/2013
I think while your free verse was a little too close to being prose, I think you did really well touching on the sense of identity to oneself and others every person goes through. It was great read :)
rust phoenix chapter 1 . 1/6/2013
A very thoughtful and relatable poem. The repetition works well, especially the shift from "Who am I" to "Who I am" in the last line.
Victor Salvador chapter 1 . 1/3/2013
Very nice! I know what you're feeling, trust me. Inspiring poem.