|Reviews for Salt Water|
| Natari Mirumura chapter 1 . 1/9/2013
A lovely and vivid piece. I like how this poem said what it wanted to say, and just did so naturally. Almost effortlessly. Amazing job, keep it up :D
| ygg chapter 1 . 1/5/2013
Very tragic words but creatively molded into a nicely flowing poem! There's an unsettling truth to them to which perhaps many people may relate to. Great work I must say!