Reviews for shots
RavenclawMoose chapter 1 . 1/17/2013
I liked the flow of this, and enjoyed the imagery, up until the last bit. I'm afraid you lost me at the last few lines. I feel like I would have understood what you were going for, but the bolding of 'lapels' and 'male persuasion' is what confuses me. Still, I liked the way this poem felt quite emotional, yet very fleeting at the same time. It was an interesting piece.