|Reviews for Upon The Wings Of A Dream|
| ThinkPi chapter 1 . 2/8/2013
This one brought out your poetically conventional side. Your use of alliteration was awesome, and while the poem felt aimless I suppose it reflects the tone of the poem overall. Besides the typo I specifically love the last line, your choice of words really helped produce the imagery for me. Lovely poem FeatheryFlow!
| Naver chapter 1 . 1/18/2013
This made me think of my poem "Golden Bird" because of the wing element. This is like another side, if the bird flying away would say something back. :)
| Atlas Symphony chapter 1 . 1/5/2013
A halo? Did someone die? Or are they so pure it's like a halo around their head? Dreams such in daydreaming or succeeding in dreams of life? Interesting. I may have missed the point