Reviews for Dreams
Ink Of Many Shades chapter 1 . 8/8/2013
Your dreams are who you are underneath all the chains and ties and cares and beliefs and everything you've had instilled in you. They are reminders of who you could have been, if things had been different. Do you want to despise that?
D. M. Robb chapter 1 . 7/6/2013
This was a lovely description of dreams. My main nitpick is the formatting. It would be a smoother read if you started each sentence on a different line instead of in the middle of another sentence. Also, "adventres" should be "adventures." Other than that, nice job!
Sally Wolf chapter 1 . 4/8/2013
You should never despise your dreams you should hold them dear and grow by learning from them.
Shizuku Tsukishima749 chapter 1 . 3/4/2013
Huh... Nice. Some really deep stuff here. XD
Angel from the Sea chapter 1 . 1/6/2013
I love the idea you get across in this. :D I know it seems rather trivial, but to me, when dealing with poetry, it is incredibly important to make sure that each word is written as you intended it. ex. piture, picture? dremas, dreams? etc. I know I know, I am not criticizing your ideas, merely the presentation of your ideas. I applaud you for sharing, and I love what you have written.
Good luck friend,
Angel
CRAZEDbySUGAR chapter 1 . 1/6/2013
so true
the line with Daydreaming...I think its my favorite
making your adventures of sleep a reality
oh just lovely