Reviews for Fear
May a Chance chapter 1 . 3/12
Next do one on confidence.
JasmineHoran chapter 1 . 1/14
Very interesting poem.

I really liked some of the similes you used (like a cage, like a prison). And what you said in your last line was very true. Fear keeps us from making stupid, sometimes dangerous mistakes, but it can also hold us back. A very interesting look at fear. I enjoyed reading this.

Well done! Keep up the great writing!

Jaz
Sally Wolf chapter 1 . 4/8/2013
"Fear, it keeps us from being stupid but it can also hold us back." Amen to that!
Shizuku Tsukishima749 chapter 1 . 3/6/2013
Nice insight! I like it! Never thought about things like that!
Angel from the Sea chapter 1 . 1/6/2013
Lovelovelove that last line. So true. I'm afraid of floors. No joke. I can't walk on floors without shoes (socks are okay, but not really). Well, I am physically able to, and I have done it before, but I do my best to have as little contact with the floor as possible. It's a little bit of a germaphobe thing, but also a flat surface thing. Fear. No I 'aint 'fraid of it er nuthin' I jus' don' like 'em.
CRAZEDbySUGAR chapter 1 . 1/6/2013
yep...once again you speak the truth
People do react to their fears in different ways
:) each person is different
the last line...I love it
just a reader chapter 1 . 1/5/2013
Seriously Down to earth. Never thought about fear that way. interesting..