Reviews for What I Didn't Expect |
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![]() ![]() I adore your stories. The only critique I have for you, it seems you may be in a hurry when typing out your words. I say this because you use the word brought instead of bought and know instead of now-a lot! At least I hope that's the reason.? If you're doing it on purpose, then I guess it's just a quirk of yours? Anyway, I hope to see more stories from you in the near future! Daydrmr |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww awesome story. I love how everything came together in the end ;-) |
![]() ![]() Read a few of your stories now and damn you are really good! Love 'Love me if you dare' and 'It began at Dreyston Bridge' keep up the awesome writing x |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a great story to follow. Glad to see it have a happy ending! I'd be curious to see you do spin offs on the other band members; would love to hear Hanks story :-). |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a nice ending to a lovely story. I really enjoyed being along for the ride with Beth, Lee and the others. |
![]() ![]() ![]() As much as I didn't want it to end, I have to say that you did an amazing job wrapping up the story. I was left with a content and happy feeling about how it ended. When will it be published into print and even more, when can we expect the movie? Seriously, Thank You. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm really loving this story! It is well written, light and entertaining. I adore the fact that Beth has stepped up to plate with Dylan. Keep it coming! |
![]() ![]() Too lazy to sign in. I honestly would have liked if Beth and Lee faught EVER lol. It's so unrealistic to me that they just both feel happy with each other all the time and neither of them is snapping under this pressure and that 24 year old Beth is being so selfless about the whole thing. That Lee is still okay with her being a stripper.. theres just too much acceptance and 100% lovey dovey behaviour for this to even seem a little real to me. And honestly, Lee is too old to be living like he does with the smoking etc. That I will believe though because of the rockstar lifestyle but still.. lol good story though. I'm enjoying it for the most part. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wish it didn't have to end. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just love this story! Keep it coming... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lee and Beth are so cool. I am so happy to see things work out so well for them. Little Dylan is such a sweet child too. Bless his little heart. See, you have me attached to them too. Good writing. You keep it so real. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really love your writing. It sweeps me away as I truly feel that I am right in the story too. I also adore your characters. They are so real and believable. Good work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just read this straight through and I love it! All of your characters are flipping adorable! I can't wait for the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a heart breaking chapter. Poor little Dylan :-( |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm loving this story. Thanks for updating. |