Reviews for What I Didn't Expect
Guest chapter 27 . 6/3/2014
I adore your stories. The only critique I have for you, it seems you may be in a hurry when typing out your words. I say this because you use the word brought instead of bought and know instead of now-a lot! At least I hope that's the reason.? If you're doing it on purpose, then I guess it's just a quirk of yours?

Anyway, I hope to see more stories from you in the near future!

renegade01 chapter 27 . 2/9/2014
Aww awesome story. I love how everything came together in the end ;-)
Nikki chapter 21 . 12/17/2013
Read a few of your stories now and damn you are really good! Love 'Love me if you dare' and 'It began at Dreyston Bridge' keep up the awesome writing x
juls88-07 chapter 27 . 2/13/2013
This was a great story to follow. Glad to see it have a happy ending! I'd be curious to see you do spin offs on the other band members; would love to hear Hanks story :-).
ctolhouse chapter 27 . 2/13/2013
What a nice ending to a lovely story. I really enjoyed being along for the ride with Beth, Lee and the others.
auroraglider chapter 27 . 2/13/2013
As much as I didn't want it to end, I have to say that you did an amazing job wrapping up the story. I was left with a content and happy feeling about how it ended. When will it be published into print and even more, when can we expect the movie? Seriously, Thank You.
kyhoney3 chapter 26 . 2/12/2013
I'm really loving this story! It is well written, light and entertaining. I adore the fact that Beth has stepped up to plate with Dylan. Keep it coming!
Jed Linx chapter 25 . 2/11/2013
Too lazy to sign in.

I honestly would have liked if Beth and Lee faught EVER lol. It's so unrealistic to me that they just both feel happy with each other all the time and neither of them is snapping under this pressure and that 24 year old Beth is being so selfless about the whole thing. That Lee is still okay with her being a stripper.. theres just too much acceptance and 100% lovey dovey behaviour for this to even seem a little real to me. And honestly, Lee is too old to be living like he does with the smoking etc. That I will believe though because of the rockstar lifestyle but still.. lol good story though. I'm enjoying it for the most part.
auroraglider chapter 25 . 2/11/2013
I wish it didn't have to end.
kyhoney3 chapter 24 . 2/8/2013
I just love this story! Keep it coming...
auroraglider chapter 24 . 2/8/2013
Lee and Beth are so cool. I am so happy to see things work out so well for them. Little Dylan is such a sweet child too. Bless his little heart. See, you have me attached to them too. Good writing. You keep it so real.
auroraglider chapter 22 . 2/6/2013
I really love your writing. It sweeps me away as I truly feel that I am right in the story too. I also adore your characters. They are so real and believable. Good work.
readingismylife chapter 21 . 2/5/2013
Just read this straight through and I love it! All of your characters are flipping adorable! I can't wait for the next chapter!
juls88-07 chapter 21 . 2/5/2013
What a heart breaking chapter. Poor little Dylan :-(
mstee5 chapter 21 . 2/5/2013
I'm loving this story. Thanks for updating.
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