|Reviews for the red sea|
| Ygg chapter 1 . 1/8/2013
Very expressive and haunting but with some beautiful imagery. Love the arrangement too as it enhances the drama markedly! Well written!
| Pzychotic chapter 1 . 1/6/2013
I like this one, because I like vampires. I don't know if you mean for it to be vampiric or not, but it seems like that because of the seductive/forbidden/temptation imagery here. I also like how you used the Adam's apple in both meanings. Very nice job!