Reviews for I couldn't get him to hear me
punctured.lungs chapter 1 . 2/15/2013
this is harsh and beautiful and amazing.
rust phoenix chapter 1 . 1/8/2013
This is really beautifully written. The imagery and emotion are very powerful, and you have a wonderful gift for metaphor. Thank you so much for the review!
TheGlycoprotein chapter 1 . 1/7/2013
This is my favourite one of your poems to date. The imagery is just completely epic and the message in the poem is just so clear. I could have cried whilst reading it, but I was to enthralled by the words that it halted the tears. You should be very, very proud of this.
True Talker chapter 1 . 1/7/2013
Interesting. When a person CARES ABOUT YOU they TRY to listen TO YOU in the best way that they can with the information that you give them. That is all that I have to add right now.