Reviews for Feelings
Natari Mirumura chapter 1 . 1/9/2013
I love the last two lines of this poem as well as the overall piece in general. I also noticed a change in your writing's format from that last time I read one of your works. Splendid - indeed. Amazing job with the rhyming and everything else! Keep it up :D
Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 1/7/2013
Great rhyming here. Keep writing! :)
Anna :)
ygg chapter 1 . 1/7/2013
Love the tone and rhyme! It all flows smoothly too. Not so easy to poetically describe, but you did a good job in portraying grief. I like the way you describe these feelings as lingering deep below the surface, left for dead. Well written!
Freiheit98 chapter 1 . 1/7/2013
Your rhymes are perfect! This is amazing. I really enjoyed reading this! Keep up the good work and writing your amazing poems! :D