|Reviews for Shadow Hunters|
| Lirimis-VI chapter 1 . 1/7/2013
From what I got from this little bit your characters and setting seem interesting and I'd like to see more of your story. I did think that the jumps in POV didn't really give a lot of time to get to know one character before the story went to introducing another. It might help to keep the POV on one character for longer, like having it be Nick's POV until he's shot then switching to Jack and Daniel's POV and back again.
Have more confidence in your writing ability because this is fine so far :)
| littlemisslibrarian chapter 1 . 1/7/2013
The Epilogue would actually be a Prologue, since it is at the beginning of the story. Also, a summary would be nice. Other than that, it seems like a good story. Write what you love, no matter whether people like it or not! Your writing will improve with practice!