Reviews for Torn
Fatal Euphoria chapter 1 . 6/12/2013
I really liked it. It is very well put together and a lot of thought clearly went into it. I liked the repetition and the dark imagery. My only criticism (if you can call it that) is that I'm not sure whether the use of ellipses was a good or a bad thing. Fantastic poem.
The Dark Muse chapter 1 . 5/4/2013
It gets to the point, but it seems a tad repetitive. Don't take my words to seriously, poetry isn't my forte but I'll say what I can think of. What I liked was that it was emotional and did give you the idea of what you felt. And the patterns seem irregular. But it was a nice poem to read. Very touching.
Darkmoon99 chapter 1 . 1/26/2013
No words can do justice for those affected by this... Beautiful and heart rending at the same time.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/10/2013
This is beautiful Sis. Brought tears to my eyes. Love you. Miss you.
Ilse chapter 1 . 1/8/2013
Wow! I like it!