|Reviews for The Shanghai Detective|
| madmoose52 chapter 1 . 1/9/2013
I enjoy the storytelling ;) Nice work on the setup. I'm not sure where the character development is going though, so maybe I'll get that from the next chapters when I get to them? Overall, nice work!
Also, there are a lot of spelling and grammatical errors, you might want to have someone edit it. I could do it, but it might take a while, as I'm going to be pretty busy with college, etc. Definitely something to consider, imo.