Reviews for Only Without You
hidden-behind-the-stars chapter 1 . 2/8/2013
Positives:
I really like the rhyming. I seriously suck at editing songs because they sound so different and the inflections and everything when you sing... BUT I really liked it. There's a feeling- I've never felt- but it's real.

Negatives:
I know you probably meant it to be like this but most the time there's a similar line to the chorus, which sounds like I'm trying to change it (I suck at this). None of the choruses are really alike. I know that it doesn't have to have chorus's that are a like but it gives a place to return to that's really nice when the chorus's are all the same.

I hope that helps.
Un-Ended Tales Unravel chapter 1 . 2/3/2013
Insight into the mind in this situation. I have never gone through a situation like this, but still the words ring true. We always want to just get away and erase the pain so we don’t have to feel it anymore. You speak the truth in beautiful words.