|Reviews for Hybrid Angel|
| Phayre chapter 1 . 3/14/2013
I apologze in advance for harshness.
What are you DOING HERE IF YOU AREN'T A GOOD WRITER? Although fictionpress is an area of free writing, it would be nice if you got a beta. If you get flames, I wonder who's fault it was. Regardless of an authors wishes and likability, people want to read GOOD fiction.
| The.Seldom.Samurai chapter 1 . 1/9/2013
Not Bad. Could use some more scenery details.