I liked it a lot! I was just wondering if any of these descriptions were about real pictures of yours. It made me a little sad at the part, "And then suddenly the photo's of her stopped and my tears started overflowing, knowing I'd come to the point where no more photo's of her could be taken. In 2004, Helena and Mark had been on their way back from Cambridge, when they got into a car crash on the M11." That made me cry a little, not going to lie. But maybe you could try to describe the people a little more, just so we can have little bit more visual about how they look? If you do decide to make this a multichaptered story, try to explain who they are a little better and what their significance it to the main character. :)