wow, Aphrodite is one cold bitch. LOVE THIS BTW!

Love the ending. The interaction between Ares and Aphrodite felt real. I noticed that you use a lot of England words and that's fine. I thought in the last chapter it was just there but now understand it's part of your tongue.

Her thighs ached and were bruises from the saddle: I think it's: Her thighs ached and were bruises from the saddle. Bruises just sounded strange there. Also beware of up cation. During the conversations there were commas instead of periods where the characters ended their speech.

Good job overall. Looking forward for the next chapter.

Wow. This is very detailed and I enjoyed the voice. I notice you used the England word honour. I don't care that you did use that word because it still means honor but others may tell you to be consistent or just change it to "honor." You used "most certainly" and I've been told that "most" cannot go next to an adverb...but in the context and tone of the statement I found it in, works for me. I also found it strange that the words, "fuck" and "bitch" would appear. I'm a fan of cursing...but I thought Gods in general would use clever words other than that. I haven't seen any type of Mythology use our American...I guess I can say that, curse words. I only have "fuck"...mostly "fuck" in my Norse story. Anyway, onto next chapter.

I like this story very much. Greek mythology has always intrigued me.

I love this story your a very great author who wrote this very great wonderful story. I cannot wait to read more chapters.