Reviews for Ghost Gunslinger
Darth Zannacross chapter 16 . 1/9/2019
Well, tests in hell are always a heated proving grounds, seems like you can't win with being sexy on this one, doh.

Damn, got a solid deal at first glance, but the devil is in the detail to say the least, so many ways this can backfire horribly.

Well, nice moment between Kenichi and Hideaki but, seems like its going to turn into traumatic territory rather fast. Should be fun to see either way...well not for are Ghost Gunslinger but for me at least lol.
Darth Zannacross chapter 15 . 12/25/2018
Well, we start off with a humorous burst thanks to Takeshi's antics. Seems like things might be changing or evolving to a new direction with Yuriko. Its a phase or something more? We will see.

Well after some cat and drawing antics we have a, unusual reaction to winning.

And after a boxing match that even Rocky would not be able to endure we end on the meaty main story resuming as we have a envoy from the Crimson King. Things are about to heat up. Till then merry Christmas.
Darth Zannacross chapter 14 . 12/11/2018
Not, quite how I expected to rebound from a tragic defeat but, guess humor is a good way to keep the stress away.

And, time for back story! So love caused a grand meltdown between great powers? Damn, Revenge of the Sith All over again.

Damn, went from a joke to suddenly cold hard truth but she got to the point.

Seemed to shape up are lead a bit, till the meowing duck sucked all the tension away lol. Well, we will see if Yamamoto will be a good co worker with Kenichi or screw him over. Should be fun to find out so till then till next time.
Darth Zannacross chapter 13 . 12/2/2018
Heh, a intermission eh? Guess we could use some levity before things heat up. Almost thought Santa was going to be a bonus fight but, just mistaken identity.

Heh, I'd say despite all this Kenichi still makes a better Santa then Tim Allen.
Darth Zannacross chapter 12 . 12/2/2018
Well, this is not what I expected, a somber twist to a already somber turn of events to drill in the sadness.

Double so since it showed she was being used by are dastardly vamperic foe for a while now, and she got the last laugh, for now.

Well, set the vibe quite well, and now I really hope vengeance is dealt with swiftly and painfully for causing this drama. Till next time another great one.
Starart152 chapter 3 . 12/1/2018
This is a nice chapter that put the relationship of the current relationship of Kenichi and the daughter of the T Corporation into a rocky one with his pervert thought. It also give a nice amount of exposition dump with humors on the way to avoid the boredom of this kind of moment.
The end of the chapter let it seems like trouble is on the way.
Darth Zannacross chapter 11 . 11/30/2018
Damn, its been a while but this story is still quite good so time to try and get back to it a little. Off to a start from, My Little Pony? Only other place I'd expect so much glomping.

But damn, Geardline seems to be the more cunning one this round, so far at least.

Still, the pressure is high this chapter as its clear who is at a disadvantage, and its always bad to be at a disadvantage to a psychopath.

The sorrow was quite thick so well done with the emotional barrage, just wish Sayuri got a Geardline needs to pay even more.

Well, eager to see where it goes from here and till next time.
Ckh chapter 26 . 10/1/2017
I really enjoyed my time with GG for what my short comment is worth. Maybe I need to reread it again to write a review - but I'll save that for when you update, haha.
lilis the pokemon lover chapter 26 . 10/27/2016
Hey there! Nice story here! I do not know how to motivate you, but do not give up! I want to read this to the end! It is an interesting story! Also, if you do not know me, I am your sister's friend, the one who wrote too many exclamation marks in my story(thanks anyway). Now, continue this story and be the writer you want to be! I will be cheering you on!
kumamon chapter 3 . 12/28/2015
Wow, I like your writing style, now that I've read it for the third time. It's light and playful and a change of mood from everything around me lately. That's great news, for me at least. I am seriously getting tired of your MIA-ness, please get back to me as soon as you can. Right. Now on to the review!

Greetings from Line Break! Again!

I like how the plot is going, Ken discovers his name and somehow remembers something from his life! That's terrific! I hope Takeshi doesn't have anything to do with Ken's death, that would be sad. :( No wonder Yuriko knew what Ken was thinking, she can read his mind! Do they share a mind or is it just a one-sided thing? As I have stated before, his whacky narrative is a plus for me, I hope Ken doesn't get more depressing over time!

Keep up the good work. Cheers!
kumamon chapter 2 . 12/26/2015
Looks like our gunslinger has a tendency to blurt out whatever's on his mind, this is going to be really funny. I like how Yuriko find Haiiro cute, that's effing cute! o(*)o I have a nitpick to point out: you mean doubled instead of doubly, right?

I like how the story is progressing. I can't certainly say that a clumsy mc is new, but it's nice to see the handicaps on his abilities. This should be interesting, if his opponent were to find out about his handicap they would use it to their advantage won't they? Why didn't he want Yuriko to explain either? I didn't really get that one.

The narrative is rather light-hearted and fun, which is something I like, because I find my own narratives to be dark and depressing. This is a change of pace of me, considering everything that's been happening. I also noted how you have the arcs planned out. Sounds like someone did do some planning.

Keep up the nice work. Cheers!
kumamon chapter 1 . 12/24/2015
Just a nitpick: 'thick purple soup' sounds better to me. Now that that's out of the way, greetings from LB's Criss Cross review thingy!

I really like your writing style, the ghost gunslinger sounds like a total dork, which is actually hella cute! I like how you used Chinese myths in this too. Maybe you should add the Demon King in later chapters too! I like the gunslinger's sense of humor, and his whacky actions. The idea that poltergeists and spirits are different is a refreshing breath of air for me, as I had always lumped them together.

Overall, I enjoyed it and I look forward to reading the other chapters! Cheers!
Benedict A.86 chapter 26 . 3/30/2015
Why do I get the feeling Ken-chan's actually the judge.
xXxd chapter 26 . 3/30/2015
It just gets darker and darker each chapters. The end in Masaru's perspective seemed to have him pulling some strings soon. So many string pullers around, the hiearchy is always changing every chapter.

Desires are dangerous, Bones. Kudos to soup lady and her acting though.

You know your body best indeed, Ryou. I didn't expect he would go against Takeshi though. Are they playing a game of Yugioh?

Dat cliffhanger leading to PPP. You got a knack for writing up to that point.

At least one character from this chapter is going to meet the death reaper soon.
Dog pls chapter 26 . 3/30/2015
For the past few weeks, I found myself rereading through the past chapters of GG on my rides going to school and going home from school. Frankly, my eyes had really blurred up during the past year, and I wasn’t one that’s impervious to motion sickness. But, once I start opening up that offline FP app on my smartphone and start reading GG, I can’t bring myself to cease ‘till the moment when I have reached my stop. That just goes to show how much I love it, no? :3 Whenever I read GG, I just forget everything for a while. My problems, stress, and everything else, to be whisked off into a world and a journey profound as it is beautiful. Once again, I just have to say thank you, Katsu-chin. For writing this story. I can’t say it enough times. I am eternally grateful to you.

With the re-read-through, I’ve finished the first arc again and am halfway through the second, and that definitely did make this chapter’s impact tome. Masaru’s writer’s block and loss of inspiration. Sayurin. Midorin. How the Crimson King made deal with Hitomi with the “bait” being to bring Sayurin back. I really despise villains who use other’s weaknesses to abuse and use them. But that’s what also makes them good villains, and I like it as much as it makes me feel angry. Again, a story that brings about solid emotions to the reader is a magnificent story. I really love how Masaru and Hitomi, being the secondary characters as they are, get so much characterization on this chapter. Like, you could really feel how much they cared for Sayurin, and how they want to see her again so badly. Midorin too. I wish for nothing else than for them to at least meet one last time, and perhaps have a really, REALLY, REALLY tight hug scene. Possible deep yuri kiss also. OuO SaMi FOREVAH!

I love this. I love how it went to “utterly hopeless and despair” as the last chapter closed up to, “a glimmer of hope” in this chapter, which reflects in the characters depicted in this chapter. Of course, I have to commend them individually, ya know!

LET’S GO MIDORIN! Cheer up everybody with your indomitable cuteness!

AWRIGHT, MASARU! Bash them demons with your keyboard! Show them a writer’s true power!

SOUP LADY FOR THE WIN! MOST BADASS GRANNY EVER! Kick that Bone-hole’s ass (I also loved the whole ploy of Zordandevis lusting for the Crimson Throne)! “I may not be his grandma, but to me, he’s my grandson.” EPIC SHIVERS AT THAT LINE HNNGHGH! So much adrenaline coursing through me!

RYOU YOU ARE THE ULTIMATE JANITOR! Hnnghg. To be honest, I have this inkling that Ryou might end up dying, but if he does, it would be in burning bright blue flames. If he’s going to go, he’s going to go in the most badass fashion ever. I just know it.

Don’t you worry, Yagami-chan. Hope is not yet lost. Kenichi will be saved. He’s suffering so much right now, so I want you to be there for him this time around, okay? No more crushing over dickweed bishounens who deserve utter garbage. Love the person who deserves your love.

Dat final scene. Oh gosh, just that whole scenario of Kenichi standing atop the Ferris wheel gave me so much jitters. I love it when minimalistic narration comes into my mind in seeping rainbow colors. Being halfway through rereading arc 2, I had cleared up that Kenichi’s mission is to capture the Judge and the person he eloped with. And to bring them out is why he caused all that chaos. “Morita-sama”. . . Hitomi’s mother, perhaps? Anyways, I just love the concept of a transcendent being falling in love. Love truly is a powerful force, enough to even make deities stupid.

This is it. The stage is almost completely set. The final battle is at hand. The “cycle” has begun once more. “I owe it to him to end the cycle”. I can see it. I’m not sure if my interpretations are correct, but I shall speculate as it is fun and exciting. This “cycle” that is referenced throughout GG might be the cycle of “reincarnation”. Of events occurring once more, of turning into a full circle. As this final arc reaches its climax, I think that only one thing remains to be answered, and it shall be the focal point of everything.

And that is.

Who is Kenichi?

Or rather,

Who was Kenichi, before? Who was Kenichi in his past life, before he died?

What memories did he have, and for what purpose did they disappear?

And has Kenichi actually been reincarnated multiple times already? Already having been witness to a multiple “cycles”?

This is going to be so epic. Hhhngh. HNNGH!

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