|Reviews for Black Raison D'etre|
| Y. S. Wong chapter 1 . 1/12/2013
Tachibana-chan is a total witch!
You have a good hook at the beginning to interest the reader, but it could use a little bit of tweaking to make it even better. But generally I liked it and it seems to give a hint that there is something darker going on underneath the surface.
There were times where your execution of the writing was a little bit weak and there are some grammatical/syntactical mistakes, but overall I think your writing is quite advanced for 14 years old.