Reviews for My Ties Are Lined With Gold
Mylilblackpen chapter 1 . 1/18/2013
I like the imagery in this. Very clever and original. Again I like the way you lace in a moral whenever you write you always give some kinda message. This one being, forgive me if I'm wrong, about greed and how it can give you all the riches in the word but can leave you without a friend in the world. I really like this piece, I think it's beautiful and really works. A small suggestion, just what I think may work, is put 'I'm sorry' without an ellipsis more a full stop to give it more impact and emotion as well as being on its own on the last line; male it more significant that the speaker is sorry. Just a suggestion. But I think this is still a brilliant and awesome piece!
My Hidden Words chapter 1 . 1/12/2013
I love the description in the line "The tens and twenties' line my skin, sewing together what is left of him"
I also like the searching for a friends. Great job!
I really like the themes in this, money, greed friendship and how well you portrayed the with put overstatement!
Mistakes-and-Memories chapter 1 . 1/12/2013
Great imagery! I love the first two lines! This is a great poem!