Reviews for The Legend of The Silver Wulf
Loza101 chapter 1 . 1/13/2013
Hey rowboat just something's that do not add up: you say 'the king took his rescued son and made a solem promise that he would find and destroy the silver beast that stole his mother away from him' you then go on to say that the king 'ordered all his armies to search for the creature that murdered his devoted wife...' I'm confused is the king alive (like in the prologue) or dead like I assume in the summary just a few little things like that also it just seems a bit rushed to me like you had an idea rushed it out and then posted rather than proof reading and perfecting. Love the idea please continue!
See you at school
Loza