|Reviews for Lost to memories|
| Ryan chapter 1 . 2/12/2013
This is along the lines I try to strive for in my current story I'm working on. I love the idea that there's something inherently wrong with us, and yet no one even notices it, realizes that we've left something behind. I also love the idea of it whispering to us, like on the few nights I actually do write I can actually faintly feel something, that small echo of longing to be reconnected with something, like a lost lover or friend, like a missing part of ourselves.
This got me back into writing tonight.
| chris morris chapter 1 . 2/12/2013
| Snazzilicious chapter 1 . 1/13/2013
And you say you don't write poetry. :P I LOVE this. And I'm not just saying that because I am a nice person. What really caught my attention was starting from "Do you miss it?" to "But you dream only in music". All of it was great, but those parts were my favorite. Now write more.
| The Wanna-Be Medic chapter 1 . 1/12/2013
Like a loss of power...? Maybe I am reading this wrong. But the poem feels to me like they are lamenting over loss of power/artistic talent.
I like the line ". . .dream only in music. . ."
I like this, please write more.