Reviews for The Selfish Man And The Wicked Woman
HighOnBrokenWings chapter 1 . 1/13/2013
Hey :)
Can I just say that this was absolutely gorgeous! Relatively short and to the point, but complex, with you folding each sentence and idea back upon itself. A very thought provoking little piece, that flowed beautifully through repetition that was not overworked or senseless. You left just enough for a thoughtful audience to piece it together and question their on morality and sense of purpose in life. Really loved it :)
There was a small mistake half way through, where you have mistyped "Does" and it reads "Doe". A simple slip of the finger that we all do :P
Keep it up!