Reviews for Along The Corridor And Up The Stairs
Mylilblackpen chapter 1 . 1/17/2013
Oh this was sweet, adorable in fact. Maybe it's just me being an old romantic at heart, but something in me willed those two to work it out - be together. I think this is a beautiful piece which makes me go all warm inside. I feel like this could be a brilliant prologue to a story, of course a story on how the two eventually got together. Still this poem is beautiful and lovely and sweet with it's imagery. The flow as well makes the poem another of my favourites! :) great work, you should be immensely proud of this!
tolerate chapter 1 . 1/16/2013
This is really cute and romantic. I like mushy things. Hehehe, I love this.
JellicleJuggalo chapter 1 . 1/14/2013
Same planet, different worlds. A really sweet poem, tells of love forbidden by caution. Made my day. Something to curl up and read with a chamomile at the end of the day. :)
True Talker chapter 1 . 1/13/2013
This has made me think.
ababababababa chapter 1 . 1/13/2013
Love it. So sweet :D
Sarah-Brighteyes chapter 1 . 1/13/2013
Love the sweetness of this poem. A world and a floor away poem! I loved this imagery! WRite on!
Erysimum chapter 1 . 1/13/2013
Very sweet!
I like this passage:
"To her never-failing memory,
And answer is never changing,
Never ending smile with her own
In every hour of waking."

all the repetitions of 'never' and the half rhymes are lovely.
..though should 'is' be 'his'? ;)