|Reviews for Days|
| Sami Dial chapter 1 . 1/14/2013
"Remember the yesterdays with fondness." a very inspirational line. very well written, good job
| Onearmwonder21 chapter 1 . 1/14/2013
| Der Adler Des Mondes chapter 1 . 1/13/2013
I love the use of correlative conjunctions to add a dramatic halt to the poem "and yet, but yet..."!
" Other days you want
For them never to end.
Other days you laugh so much
Your lungs ache.
Other days you feel like you
Could reach the sky.
Other days your heart
Is full of joy."
This has to be my favorite part, it flows so nicely in my mind and I can easily associate it with memories of mine.
This poem feels like a gentle collage of life gone by, with a certain promise at the end, to do better as life doesn't last and sorrows are part of that life!