|Reviews for On the Hunt|
| Jessie L. Star - AKA star123 chapter 11 . 7/8/2014
| Amy chapter 11 . 7/7/2014
| GracieRoxslikeAVA chapter 1 . 7/16/2013
Hello! Sorry to be writing this as a review, but I couldn't get my pm to turn on. Anyway I just wanted I stop in and say how sorry I am about this whole plagiarism bullshit. It has truly been the slow death of fictionpress. I have been following your writing for quite a while now, though as a silent reader, and it is such a shame that there are people out there willing to go to such extreme lengths with other people's work. I wish you the best of luck, and will be sure to continue to read your work on livejournal.
| Soothsayer35 chapter 10 . 7/13/2013
I'm so sorry that you were plagiarized repeatedly and then that person/persons actually tried to profit from your work. I cannot image how you feel right now and it makes me sick that you have had to endure it (repeatedly, at that).
I fully understand why you are unable to post here any longer, but if you do post somewhere in the future or publish, I do hope you'll let readers know. You have a great deal of talent and I would hate to think that horrible people's actions might impact you love and talent for writing. Good luck!
| Guest chapter 9 . 7/12/2013
Will you be posting our writing on any other more secure site. I've loved all of your stories. I hate that this is happening to fictionpress. I've been on here for 8 years and all the best writing is now gone.
| givemesomefiction chapter 10 . 7/8/2013
I just found you again last week and reread On The Run. Then there's this sequel and I am so lookong forward to reading the continuation of this story. But well...
I always think plagiarists are pathetic, knowing that they have no talent and thinking copying someone's writings makes a difference.
I really am sorry of what happened to you. It's been too many times I am left with a cliffhanger just because of those dumbs.
Anyway thank you for writing! I adore you!
| Pumpkinflower chapter 1 . 7/7/2013
I'm so sorry of what has happened to you. I really can't understand people who plagiate stories from others. I'd definately pay for your stories, they are so good. And I'm really hoping that in some point I'll be able to buy your wonderfull stories online somewhere, as I'm really anxeous to read what happened next. I have been waiting this update for long and it sucks that this isn't going to continue in here anymore. I totally understand your decision, it must feel horrible. But you are amazing writer, maybe you should write about what happens to stupid people who plagiate stories from others.
p.s. You are my favourite writer in fictionpress ever.
| Guest chapter 10 . 7/6/2013
I'm really sorry to hear people are plagiarizing you (still). Please do look into self-publishing, you're a wonderful writer, and I would totally pay to read your stories!
| insoliloquy chapter 1 . 7/6/2013
I am incredibly sorry that you've been put in this situation - to know that people are profiting from something you put effort and work into is absolutely disgusting. That said, I hope you continue writing! If I may - I would suggest self-publishing somewhere yourself! It seems much safer than posting on here, and I'm sure that many of your loyal readers would be happy to have the opportunity to continue reading your stories, because it's definitely worth the price! I enjoyed reading your stories here very much - thank you for posting here, it always brightened my day.
| torrential2rayn chapter 10 . 7/1/2013
Thank you for this wonderful story!
| Jessica chapter 1 . 6/7/2013
| Pumpkinflower chapter 10 . 6/6/2013
I love this story and can't wait for more! Usually I don't even read uncomplete stories but after reading everything else from thenifoundfivedollars I had to and I'm clad I did.
I just love Olivia and Raleigh and I'm waiting sooooo much more scenes of them together. I'm really hoping to see scenes where they are with Jim or similar charachter and they'll have to tolerate and learn to like eachothers in off-work life. And I'm also waiting the moment when Raleight realises that Olivia is really Jims daughter and he is not calling her "My girl" only because she is beloved customer. Can't wait for the update!
| Salt and Vinegar Pringles chapter 10 . 6/3/2013
excellent story! and fantastic sequel. i love that you haven't knocked off ryan and tori from the story. i also love the dynamic relationship between raleigh and olivia. it kicks arse! can't wait for the following chapter!
| Jessie L. Star - AKA star123 chapter 10 . 5/28/2013
Poor Olivia, she really got shafted in this chapter. Of course Raleigh got her the necklace she liked (which was awesome), but it's just going to infuriate her more. I enjoyed him being all concerned when he thought she was still in the building.
Sorry this is such unproductive feedback, but I was honestly just enjoying the story and nothing jumped out as requiring massive improvement. Cheers!
| Jessie L. Star - AKA star123 chapter 9 . 5/28/2013
Oh my God, it IS a bitch straightening out that ponytail crease! I hate that!
And the bit where Raleigh grabbed her arm was awesome, I loved that he was caught off-guard and she got the upper hand for once. The fact that she was in a backless dress makes it even better (I love backless dresses!).
'So it looks like we're just having dinner together' definitely favourite line. Especially coming from Olivia as she's usually the one being all aloof and this time she was the one being vaguely suggestive.