oh wow. i didn't think that they would run into each other at a coffee shop, that's surprising. but even more so is the "new" and different side of braxton :) how cute is it for him to watch his niece and nephew. hopefully we'll see him in their presence a little more and how much he cares about them, maybe when olivia sees it :) i seriously can't wait for the interaction between braxton and olivia to get more heated! looking forward to the next chapter

There's a new chapter! You must have uploaded it JUST as I was reading Ch2. AHHHH. I'ts like you updated just for me. :D

I ADORE how Raleigh and Olivia meet after 3 years of being enemies. They're adorable and the angry tension and the playful rivalry is sooo much fun. Already and I can't wait for more of them togetherness. :D

Love it so much! Olivia is the best kind of character and I think I'm really going to enjoy reading this.

Amazing yet again! Keep up the good work!

Your reader,
Clawstrike590

I was NOT expecting him to baby sit 7 and 9 yr olds. And he's going to teach them MATH?!
I am mildly speechless and I can't even imagine what Olivia will be when she sees him with the two kids. It promises to be a riveting encounter.

:) I love it! I'm so glad you decided to write this, I'm hooked already and I can't wait for more!

Really enjoyed these two chapters. Raleigh comes across as an intriguing figure. I like his thought process as well as Olivia's I can tell there will be interesting things to come in the future. I'm also looking forward to how this will be staged seeing as both of their POV's will be so much more separate that On The Run seeing as Tori and Ryan were situated in the same place much of the time.

Amazing job as usual! Keep it up! This is definitely something to look forward to. Loving Olivia and Raleigh so far.

Still your avid reader,
Clawstrike590

good start update soon :)

ATJAKJDSFLSJDF;LKAJDS;LFKAJDSLKFJA :) i love your writing, you're absolutely amazing! i cant wait to read more about olivia and braxton :) please update soon!

oh man, i'm hooked. found your other story "on the run" a few days ago, read it in one go and i loved it. now i can't wait to see how this story develops. i'm even more interested in this story because olivia is a little more relatable for me. hopefully another update will be up soon. looking forward to that, all the best :)

Really great start! Olivia and Raleigh sound like characters I'm really going to enjoy reading about. Looking forward to your next update.

Somehow, I completely missed that chapter two came out. *face palm* but I went to check what my last review to you said after reading your response and saw C2 reviews. So of course, here we are!
I love that she has a dog, partly because I adore animals and partly because I think it fits with how she lives. And I totally understand her need for wanting others to be organized and neat even when she can't be the same - cause I'm so like that. Tori! I think it's wonderful that they have a growing friendship - and nessacary. Tori went through a lot and while she has supportive friends, none of them really understand what she went through. Olivia would, as she works and deals with cases that was Tori's life. And I think Olivia needs someone who just throws fun at her.
I'm truly excited for the re-meeting of Raleigh and Olivia. Because I think there's so much UST that when they meet it'll be like a thunderstorm. And things will explode into action. Or the UST will build evermore and who doesn't love unresolved sexual tension?
Your Ever Long Winded Reviewer of a Reader,
Cara

Hmmm, I have sneaking suspicion Raleigh is going to shake up Olivia's world more than she knows. Not an old cat lady after all! So glad you have started a new story and I can't wait to see more ;)

Loved the update, keep those magical fingers of yours typing!