AWEsome !
love you tons for quick updates.

Short chapter! But it had some agent/criminal action, and I bet that next chapter's going to be filled with action and stuff... Hehehe. There is no way this night is going to run smoothly.

Like is not far from love! Wohooo! Now I also want chocolate-covered strawberries...

I like that it's going slow, unlike Twilight (OMG he's sooo beautiful, WHY does he hate meeee? I looooove him! Never-ending looove! After like ten pages). Slow is realistic. And good. Till next time!

Oh, how I love this story! You absolutely made my day :D
I liked the beginning where Olivia and Tori bond. I do like them as friends (and I hope Tori was really overreacting).

"At some point - he wasn't sure exactly when - he'd grown to like her."
"he was still a tad offended that nothing betrayed her stoic expression"
"He didn't want her spoiling the heist, and he didn't want his guys spoiling her."
Oh, he likes her alright ;)

I'm curious how this is going to turn out!

Damn, Agent Hunt playing sexy. She's got Raleigh wrapped around her finger doesn't she, just a little bit. huh... Good for her.

I have an odd feeling that the man following Tori is the poolside rapist. just a little.

Either way, looking foreward to the next chapter.
WritingKnightmare

How cute! He's become protective :) Probably understandably... Looking forward to more! (As always ;) ) Take care!

Have you ever seen the TV show White Collar before? Whenever I read your story, I envision Neal and Sarah! I love this story (and everything you write, honestly, as seen by my raving reviews hahaha) so I'm holding my breath for your next installment, (:

man, can i just say that i kinda sorta love raleigh... i honestly cannot wait for them to get together, i have a feeling that their relationship will be really cute and unique and ugh i'm so excited haha, awesome chapter like always, hope to read the next one soon!

Cute ending, I love the way his mind works. ;) More please!

Always fun to read about Olivia and Braxton running into each other, though I wonder if Braxton is doing it on purpose.

Oh, and I found one incongruity: Is it suppose to be "cinched" instead of "senched"?
"A female detective in a senched trenchcoat and blood red lipstick scowled back at me."

Um, so I have no clue what happened. I went to check when the last update for this story was, and when I saw that chapter 8 was up, I was so confused! I never received an email from FP about it. But I did receive the email for The Break-Up Plan. What?! I hope it was just a glitch on their part, because I need to receive any and all updates from you!

So, I'm sorry for the lateness of this review. I would have read this MUCH sooner if I had known.

The chapter was AMAZING. I'm not sure I can even pinpoint was stood out to me the most. Of course, I loved Olivia and Raleigh's interactions, especially the cute little "they're both reading in amicable silence" part. I also loved that she reluctantly accepted the ride from him; she's becoming a fraction more trusting of him. I also liked Olivia's conviction and backbone when she was talking to her boss. She's just great.

[But I tapped it down; I could be sweet and happy. There were cupcakes here, afterall.] God, most perfect line ever.

I am super curious about Raleigh's background. I'm guessing the fact that his sister brought up his dad means something? :)

Keep up the incredible work. I love love love this story.

I have to say that I've never read the prequel "On the Run" before but after reading the chapters of this upcoming story, as a writer you have this talent for writing very interesting and well written adventure/romance plots. Cause after just reading a few chapters I'm already hooked on the story and I can't wait to see what will happen next at the jewelery auction.

I really do enjoy the fact that Olivia Hunt is an independent FBI agent who has the ability to take care of herself, it's a really great change from the whole "shy, introverted, dependent, extremely naive" main female characters that I've been seeing a lot lately in the romance stories LOL. In the end the change is great and I'm really looking forward to reading the next chapter! :-)

Another great chapter! I love the idea of them at the coffee shop on a reading date :) crazy to notice how Braxton's happier and Olivia is still trying so hard to frame him! Wish she wouldn't be so stubborn so she can fall for him sooner :) update again soon! Xoxo

good chapter :D

I really love this story. Especially the intensity you have created between Olivia and Raleigh. Please update soon x

I had read sitting in my car before work when you posted this. So I didn't get a chance to sit down at my laptop and write this review til now haha.

I adoreeddddd that both parties have people someone rooting for them to get together, or suspect that there's a special somebody in their life.. or someone trying to be anyway haha. That and he is really trying to meet her at that coffee shop.

And yeah Raleigh doesn't seem to be dark enough to do something too crazy. I love the interactions with his family.

Can't wait for the next update! :D
*Ngoc1231*