LOVED this chapter. I loved every single bit of it. I think the fact that Olivia and Raleigh have entered into a sort of deal is a perfect way to bring them a bit closer together. Their interactions are fantastic; such fun to read. Even the handshake was great.

I wonder what Raleigh's participation in this new jewelry heist will bring! So exciting. I love reading about these criminal undertakings!

I also have a feeling Jim will be a force that brings Olivia and Raleigh together. Ooh, I'm just so excited to see what you have in store!

[He frowned and rubbed the back of his neck in a gesture I'd seen him do before, when he was stressed. Perhaps Agent Tanner was right. Maybe I was becoming an expert on Braxton.] - I thought that was a great line and very indicative.

I did notice one thing, though. Jim says, "My Livi's a cop." But federal agents aren't referred to as cops, maybe as a "fed"? Obviously, this is such a miniscule detail that it doesn't matter, just wanted to point it out!

Thanks for yet another great update and I'm really REALLY looking forward to more!

Such a lovely story! I love how you can see how soft Raleigh is, and how he'll get softer. And how Olivia is already aware of the sexual tension. Can't wait for it to progress!

THEY TALKKK (: not much fluff but its okayy ;) LOL and aww Raleigh being kinda subtly "sweet-ish" by telling Olivia to be careful (: ajsdrjafakjfdskajdlkfsja awwww! oooh action coming up in the next chapter? love action just as much as fluff...but maybe fluff by an eeensy bit more ;) hope you update soon! :D

Hey!
At first I was worried that Olivia and (no, I can't spell his name, so yes, I copy and paste it) Raleigh wouldn't be able to get together, since he's a criminal, and would go straight to prison if caught, but if the 'good guys' have no evidence... Hehehe...
However, I like this story, the characters are easy to relate to and like, no weird plot.
So... Umm...*insert awkward silence* see you later!
Maybe it should be write you later, since I'll probably never see you in person.. Write you later!

I'm excited that Raleigh knows Jim; it'll give Olivia and Raleigh to interact more - and maybe help them steer their conversations away from crime. Not that their current conversations aren't exciting, but they might get a chance to lose their "professional" sides (for a lack of a better word) and get to know each other in a different way as well.

Raleigh clearly trusts Olivia, to an extent at least. And she's right, if the information does get back to him...it wouldn't be good. But he mustn't think it will, or else he wouldn't have told her.

"You don't know him like I do" - I loved the irony of that sentence. Jim, really, you have no idea. Though maybe Jim does know him as well, just in a different way. And that sentence could be correct.

Raleigh's thoughts are, as always, interesting. I love how he makes robbery sound like an art!

This was a good chapter, though I can't wait till more action comes!

Love this! Looking forward to your next update! :)

Well look at that, a thief with a soft side.
It's as if Raleigh is leading two seperate lives, I like that :)
He gave up information though, is that going to come back to bite him in the you-know?
Already looking forward to the next one!

Great chapter once again! I loved how Braxton can't somehow figure iut that Olivia is the step-daughter of Jim. It just makes things more interesting. Also, I can't wait for what you have in store for us next! Update soon!

Still your excited reader,
Clawstrike590

Please update soon! even though you just updated... :)

Yup cleared up everything. And I'm curious to hear why Raleigh got into this business. And I was a bit intrigued that he took up the offer with Tyson. But after the "no signs of tampering" I knew why.

It was also interesting that he would give up info about the other guy. I guess different circles. It's is quite true though, there's a big different between stealing to steal and taking revenge. That and the not harming the innocent til it being necessary.

And I always get really excited when I see that you replied, cus that usually means that I get to read another chapter! :D

Can't wait for the next chapter!
*Ngoc1231*

Kay..this is immoral of me to say but Livi and Raleigh hooking up would be so hot. I mean...dark and dangerous, right? Who can resist that?

Ooooooooooooooooooooo I LOVE UPDATES!

I loved your other story about Ryan and Tori, and I love this one too! :)

I was surprised to see that Raleigh didn't ask anymore about Olivia. But hey, she was hiding and he was just paying attention. It was cool to see into how he was planning on putting the heist down. That and seeing how he was talking about some art heist history. That's really interesting though.. to think that they only go to jail for that long.

I am super excited to see the play out with Olivia and her step-father. And it was cute to see all of the back story behind her life. I appreciated when we physically get to see the interactions of the back ground info of a character.

Can't wait for the next update!
*Ngoc1231*