Reviews for On the Hunt
Carmel March chapter 6 . 2/26/2013
This is the one FP story that I just get positively giddy when I see a new update. I just want you to know how rare it is for me to find a story like that!

Loved this chapter, not that that comes as any surprise. I feel the plot thickening! And I love it because I don't know what to expect and you keep me on my toes. I'm very interested in the link between Raleigh and Jim. Seems that Olivia and Raleigh were connected without even knowing it!

I really liked the last section. Getting a bit into Raleigh's criminal mastermind is intriguing and I really love him. He's so...enigmatic. And you're doing such a great job with all the...well, art thief stuff. Ha!

So happy to hear the next chapter will be up soon! I'll be looking forward to it :)
Ayine chapter 6 . 2/26/2013
They're back :D
He's friends with her dad? He's full of surprises that one :p
Eagerly awaiting the next chapter!
anonymous chapter 6 . 2/25/2013
Thanks for updating!
Marmalade Summer chapter 6 . 2/25/2013
I love how fast you're updating. Even if you're KILLING me with teasing the Raleigh and Olivia!

Can't wait for the next one.
Ladyodd chapter 6 . 2/25/2013
Thanks for the update!
How long has Raleigh known her step dad, I would think if he was good friends with him, Raleigh would have known that Jim had a step daughter.
foreternity chapter 6 . 2/25/2013
3 you updatedd! :D no olivia and raleigh in this chap :s but NEXT CHAPP HOPEFULLYY! (: :) thaanks for updatttingg!
Pseudonym59 chapter 6 . 2/25/2013
Aw, I feel bad for Olivia. I understand Jim still loves her and that the two are still close, but it's almost like she was sent to the backburner after Thomas was born. :(

Hehe. Imagine if Jim and his friend try to set up Olivia and Raleigh. :)
Clawstrike590 chapter 6 . 2/25/2013
Awesome chapter as always! Great to see an update from you.

I have only one question for you: who's Jason? Here's the line with it:

-"Well maybe he won't be too full to join me for dessert."

Jason laughed. "He wouldn't deny you anything, Livi. You know that."-

Just asking. Anyway. Great chapter but kinda short and not much on Braxton and Hunt but I like the fact that you included Raleigh's stakeout. It makes things interesting. I hope you plan on making a Olivia-Raleigh scene soon and a scene that explains Braxton's relation to Jim.

Okay, that was much longer than I thought. Haha.

Looking forward as usual,
Clawstrike590
Devilish Kisses chapter 6 . 2/25/2013
Fantastic as usual :) except, I think you made a mistake above...you referred to Larry as Jason. Thanks again for the update!
NoCheesePlease chapter 6 . 2/25/2013
I want more to be happening! I understand that you have to set the story up so as to not look like a lustful quick encounter of a bad romance kind, but I'm so impatient for a spark or something to happen between the two of them!
samiam chapter 5 . 2/19/2013
Loved the opening. AH. I wish there were more chapters to read. I want to know HOW these two end up together.
samiam chapter 4 . 2/19/2013
Mavery and Moose are so cute! Ha. Good chapter. Short, but there's more. So that's good.
samiam chapter 3 . 2/19/2013
Raleigh is so funny! I love how Olivia made him buy her coffee. She's definitely got a backbone even if she is surprisingly sweet.
samiam chapter 2 . 2/19/2013
It's like Raleigh is a bad guy, but he's not a bad guy. If you know what I'm saying. :)

I like it. It'll make it mroe believable for her to fall for him. Soonish I hope!
samiam chapter 1 . 2/19/2013
I adored Olivia in your other story. When she bossed Ryan around it was funny. Definitely looking forward to reading her story.

And Raleigh is awwwwwesome.
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